In ordinary days.
In rush of everyday.
That turn to family
On who you can depend
When all seems lost
When darkness descends
Gained from positivity
All will be well
Spent and yet to come
A lifetime full
From tiny arms
Of hands held tight
When you want to cry
That will last forever
For saving me
So we’re complete.
9 thoughts on “Gratitude”
This is so lovely, I got a shiver when I read the last verse. Well done you!
This is lovely, I got a shiver when I read the last verse. Congratulations on a supper piece of writing.
Sorry there are 2 comments – first didn’t post then popped up when I posted the 2nd!
No problem, thank you for your comments & for reading x
This is so powerful and beautiful Becky. I don’t know your story but hope you’re ok. x x
This is really beautiful Becky, and now knowing the back story, all the more powerful. Sending love x Thank you so much for sharing with #ThePrompt x
A beautiful poem and, like Johanne, the last verse gave me shivers. I’ve just read your last few posts – sending lots of love. xxx #theprompt
An absolutely wonderful poem…every single verse. Brilliant 🙂 #theprompt
Oh this is so clever, true and perfect, real talent in this piece, well done indeed! #ThePrompt