5 thoughts on “Drifting

  1. I really enjoyed this. I loved the way it started off feeling like a calm summer’s day, floating in the sea and then became more serious. I thought the change of tone was very clever and quite unexpected – I reread it several times #Prose4T

  2. Yes, I agree with ‘baby anon’ I felt the shift in the poem to a slightly darker side. Very clever and well written Becky.

    Mainy – myrealfairy

    #prose4t

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